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You have been rejected so many times
But you keep getting back up
Because you think
There’s someone out there for you
I honestly don’t know why you try so hard
For it’s just going to make it that much worse

So why do you say love’s forever
Because as long as I am here
I will say that there’s no forever
So there’s no reason to get so excited
Because when you think that you
Have nothing to lose
You really have nothing to gain

I can only see the misery getting worse
But you refuse to let me help you
Because you think that my words are untrue
So all I can do is sit back and watch
While you continue to get more miserable
And I can see that you will regret it

So why do you say love’s forever
Because as long as I am here
I will say that there’s no forever
So there’s no reason to get so excited
Because when you think that you
Have nothing to lose
You really have nothing to gain

Your social barriers are fading
With every rejection you suffer
But you still refuse my help
Because you think that you know best
This isn’t helping out at all
For I can see you are slowly breaking

So why do you say love’s forever
Because as long as I am here
I will say that there’s no forever
So there’s no reason to get so excited
Because when you think that you
Have nothing to lose
You really have nothing to gain

You hide from the world now
I tried to warn you about the dangers
But you refused to listen
So I can only shake my head
Because now you have lost all hope
That you will ever find happiness
Some people are just delusional
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:iconcrmdrummergirl:
CRMdrummergirl Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist
me likey. and entirely agree with your comment. Do you have music written or just the lyrics?
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bodders1991 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
Just the lyrics, like with any other stuff that I seem to write these days.
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:iconcrmdrummergirl:
CRMdrummergirl Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist
ok, just wondering since I'm a drummer and I started thinking in beats lol
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bodders1991 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
I see... well what kind of beats are you seeing in this song?
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CRMdrummergirl Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist
the entire chorus and many of the lines in the verses can be done with 3 beats per line, so if it were to be set to music, i'd say 3/4 time. some instrumental space after the verses. if you were thinking of it as more pop-y a lot of basic high hat-snare-bass drum stuff, if you wanted to go darker, then a lot of low tom tom, and some bass drum rumble in the background
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bodders1991 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Interesting... I will have to have a think about the ideas you've suggested.
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littlerecklessheart Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
I like it, it would sound great on the radio with the right melody.
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bodders1991 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
I'm glad that you like it. :)
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:iconlittlerecklessheart:
littlerecklessheart Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
so am I. :p
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