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I never thought I’d see the day where it happened
The world should just look away in shame
They always make it sound like love makes the world go round
But they know that it’s already expired
So why do they keep trying to look for me?

This world is filled with so many liars that it’s simply unreal
But nobody cares that most of them get into power
And people only care if they take away their rights
Or if they take away something that they either need or want
That’s what the world is always like

I’m surprised that it took this long to see the truth
That the feeling love has expired by the time you’re in your teens
You think that you know what love feels like
But only because you’re getting what you want
And most of the time all you simply want is to have sex

Unleashing you into the world that is filled with desire
I bet that a lot of fathers are worried about their daughters these days
Since rape is so popular amongst the greedy bastards out there
They’re already terrified as it is
Thinking that some scum will try to attack them at night

Empty to the world outside
You merely stare into the mirror and wonder what you’ve done
You’re hands have always been stained with blood
It’s been this way ever since you thought you fell in love
But that’s why it’s been so expired

I’m surprised that it took this long to see the truth
That the feeling love has expired by the time you’re in your teens
You think that you know what love feels like
But only because you’re getting what you want
And most of the time all you simply want is just sex

Lust is the only way that people can fulfilled their desires
Death is the way that people try to repair the damage done
But even then it’s just way too late
Asking me if I want to go on a date is just putting it off
I don’t have a desire for something that has already expired

I’m surprised that it took this long to see the truth
That the feeling love has expired by the time you’re in your teens
You think that you know what love feels like
But only because you’re getting what you want
And most of the time all you simply want is just sex

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Some of us will always have an issue with something. This is mine.

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=Lady-Luck03 Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
This is a very strong piece of work. I really like that the third stanza is repeated. Good job.
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:iconbodders1991:
Thank you, I'm glad you that like it.
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~dragondave10 Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome to the club. This is good
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~dragondave10 Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OK. I retract my previous statement and add this:
You got it straight on the head. Love is gone sometimes, and the world is just full of players and people who think they love you only to change their mind within a week. Sometimes they leave you for someone that is just going to hurt them, and that hurts to the person that loves them. This is just a good way of saying what has happened to love and when did lust take its place
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:iconbodders1991:
I see, well, I'm glad that you like it and hope to do more that will impress in the future.
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~dragondave10 Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
EXACTLY! Same to you
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