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People tell us that we are weak
They don't know what we've been through
So if they can finally see
What we've been through
They would surely change their minds
The words "don't die on me"
Bring back horrid memories

I don't want to wish
I don't want to scream
But I wish you were part of me
So tell me how you feel
Cause I want to know the truth
So don't die on me

She was on her back
Whimpering in pain
Nothing could ever prepare us for this
But we knew that she was losing to death
Will you ever be able to tell her friends
How she died
"Don't die on me" the healers uttered

"Don't die on me"
You whispered to your lover
As she took her last breath
I found it hard to watch
But it's never easy
To see someone who you love die

When will I ever get to see
Why I'm in this fight
With a man with monstrous strength
This will never end until one of us has dies
And I can hear someone say
"Don't die on me"

I blink as my world explodes in pain
I look at the sword sticking out of my chest
I wonder how it ever got there to begin with
I can see you with tears in your eyes
I can hear you say to me those horrid words

Don't die on me
Don't die on me
Don't die on me

I just couldn't stay alive for you
These four words have been uttered, shouted, screamed, begged so many times that I felt the need to write this.
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012   Writer
This is almost divided into three sections. The speaker becomes three different people in a sense. Nicely written, and those four words haunt me as well sometimes.
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bodders1991 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Thank you, I'm glad that you like it.
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4sauce4 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Writer
Brilliant
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bodders1991 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :)
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DinosurGirl Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Writer
this is amazingg<3 i can relate to a little bit of this (: I love all the emotion and everything !
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bodders1991 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :)
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DinosurGirl Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Writer
yeah me tew xD i love reading other peoples poetry other than mine xD
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MentalDespond Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing! I love the emotion you put into this, you can honestly feel the mood as you read it. You did a great job ^^
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bodders1991 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :)
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