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You walk down the red carpet
Taking in the fame and the glory all around you
Of being a world famous actor that has it all
Life has never been better for you right now
So what would you do if we simply took it all away?

Shatter the crystal ball and smash up some dreams
Laugh at the pain filled stare that’s filled up with greed
You will never have another chance at the gold
It’s your fault to begin with
For you could have avoided the seed

Cracked mirrors and half-hearted dates to the prom
Bet you wish you weren’t that little girl crying in the shadows
Wishing that your parents would stop fighting
Hoping and begging that they would get along
How much longer before you wish this nightmare wasn’t yours?

Corrupted your ambitions and twisted it into an lust
Gold, sex and fame just seems like the same
But to most of the people in the world it’s just a fantasy away
For they just don’t have the drive and determination to reach the end
Maybe we should just tell them that giving up is not too fun

Life up to now has just be child’s play with no clue of the troubles
However most people don’t give a damn and complain
For they think that life is unfair when they can’t do anything right
Why do so many people complain about stuff being too hard
When they never really had a chance to complete it to begin with?

You reach out as your dream finally escapes you
The ambition that you craved out for yourself is just a fantasy
They’re no chance for you to be able to do anything about it
But it’s not the end of the world if you just stand up
Stand up and try again to get something that can help

I may boast that I have more brilliance than anyone else
But I am merely a simple man just like every one of you
Don’t think that I am immortal for I can still die like you
Why carve out a statue for me when I’m already made out of stone
Within the history books

Don’t give up just because you missed out on your dream
We live in a world that is too quick to believe in false reasons
There are a lot of cracked mirrors and half-hearted dates
But that’s to be completely expected
Or else there wouldn’t be dreams
:iconbodders1991:
Everything has something going wrong, dreams are just one of them.
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:iconjean-marie-arouet:
Huh, I was just thinking about the same thing in a way. I have dipped deep into pain, self loathing, and self pity. I will never play my life is worse than yours.
On to productiveness, I can't wrap my head around those last few lines. Would you help me out?
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:iconbodders1991:
The last few lines? You mean the last few stanza of the poem?
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:iconjean-marie-arouet:
The following from the ultimate stanza;


There are a lot of cracked mirrors and half-hearted dates
But that’s to be completely expected
Or else there wouldn’t be dreams

I believe there are fractured self images and half-hearted dates? Are you talking about two people coming together to share in
each others time potentially due to a deep seated feelings of affection, please remember that I am cold hearted. I dig you and want to know what you wrote.
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:iconbodders1991:
I wrote those lines as a sign that failures are to be expected, but don't give up too soon, or else you won't achieve your dreams.

I feel that anyone who is trying to achieve something, must not give up too quickly, or they will never achieve what they are capable of. That was the message of those last few lines. Yes there are people who are always trying to bring you down in life, but that is normal. Don't let those people who are doing everything they can to put you down stop you from doing what you are capable of. Anyone who whos hard to try and achieve their success will be able to understand.

I hope that makes it clearer for you.
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:iconjean-marie-arouet:
That makes plenty of sense to me. It is actually piquant when you heard Soviets Say xhotiit nye vredno. Theres nothing wrong with wanting. In that system to be a Jew and say that is a strong image of self-motivation. To live under Stalin and say that tells a world about not giving up on life.

I thought you were saying that a bent self image and bad dates were part of life. My mistake.
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